Sunday, 3 November 2013

Writing It Right: Recognizing Progressive Tense by Carolynn Carey


Progressive tense is not a common topic when writers talk about writing. In fact, based on some contest comments I’ve received in the past, I think I can say with confidence that some writers wouldn’t recognize the progressive tense if it was staring them in the face.
What makes me say this? Because I’ve written sentences similar to “John was walking down the road” and had judges suggest I change it to “John walked down the road.” Why? Because that judge had latched onto the word “was” and thought my sentence was passive. Only if I had written “The road was walked down by John” would the sentence have been passive.
But back to progressive tense.  What is it and when should it be used?
According to Sin and Syntax: How To Craft Wickedly Effective Prose, the progressive tense “comes into play when we are talking about an action as it is regarded over time. The progressive tenses convey a sense of ongoing or not-yet-completed action.” The author goes on to say that the past progressive (the tense most of us would be using) “kicks in for something that was happening in some previous time.”
According to the Chicago Manual of Style: “When joined with a verb’s present participle, it [the verb to be] denotes continuing or progressive action {the train is coming} {the passenger was waiting}. When joined with a past participle, the verb becomes passive {a signal was given} {an earring was dropped}.
The Chicago Manual of Style also says: “If an inflected form of to be is joined with the verb’s present participle, a progressive conjugation is produced {the ox is pulling the cart}. The progressive conjugation is in active voice because the subject is performing the action, not being acted on.”
So don’t be afraid to use the progressive tense. In fact, I often find it to be the most effective way of describing an action. Thus, when I am writing and use a progressive tense, I’m showing ongoing action, which is not a bad thing to do.

Monday, 1 July 2013

Taman Bunga Indonesia

Taman Bunga Indonesia located in Cisarua, Bogor. located in a village which is about 2km from the main road. After I got there, you have to pay admission motorcycle parking / car, then you walk about 100m to get to the counter inside into Taman Bunga Indonesia. Ticket prices vary, for children and adults.

             Childhood: Monday - Thursday = Rp. 10,000 / person
                                       Friday - Sunday = Rp. 15,000 / person
             Of Adults: Monday - Thursday = Rp. 20,000 / person
                                          Friday - Sunday = Rp. 30,000 / person

after entering the park, we will be presented with a beautiful view. On the right there Orchid Flower shaped dinosaurs. There you will walk to enjoy the facilities, the available roadside benches to rest, there is also a fountain in the middle of the pedestrian pathway. If you go on ahead, there is another flower garden.

There's more, run into you will find artificial lake in the middle of the lake stands a statue of a woman half chest being stretched both hands. Over into another there is a cactus garden variety type.

After the Cactus Garden, there is a park named Puzzle (Maze). There are 3 tunnels are made ​​of a bunch of flowers and in the tunnel was available 2 bench for the visitors. The playground contains a flying fox. And there are many other parks.

Museum Pancasila Sakti



This site pays to tribute the horrific perios in 1965 when seven high-ranking Indonesian military personnel were brutally tortured by the notorious Indonesian Communist Party (PKI). Formerly the site of PKI's training and assembly center, it now feartures a monument, a diorama museum, the well where bodies were thrown during the rebellion and a hall of relics. The exhibition celebrates the ultimate victory of Pancasila over communism. Some of the displays, however, are rather disturbing. The name Lubang Buaya (Crocodile Hole) comes from a legend that there were once white crocodiles in the nearby river.

It is located in Cipayung, East Jakarta. If you wanna go there, you must have Rp. 12.000 to go inside. In there, you can see the plot of how brave that seven men till they were thrown into the Crocodile Hole (Lubang Buaya). Many statues that  showing the brave they are. There are also statues depicting the 7th general. The statues stand around the statue of the eagle in the middle. On the front there is a hole where the removal of the generals. And beyond, there is a garden that visitors to relax off fatigue. Oh I forgot, on the left (if you are from the entrance) there is a house which contains the statues that be a picture when they are putting together a plan with the other residents.

Be there if you really wanna know about the history of them. God bless!

Order Letter



OPPERTUNESIA
Ruko Antara, Blok B 212-214
Bekasi, 17115
Telp. (021) 777-88-909


May 2 , 2013

Margianto Ningrat
LOLLIPUPS Inc.
JL. Gunung Kerinci V No. 15,
Jakarta Selatan

Dear Margianto Ningrat,

Enclosed is a money order for two hundred dollar ($155) in return for which please send me by parcel post:
1 piece skirt, maroon and white, size 33, No. H61 – $60.00
1 pair of white flat shoes, crepe soles, size 4, C width – $40.00
1  blue navy sweater, V-neck, size 30, No. B22 – $55.00

Please send these articles within five days.

Any questions regarding this order should be directed to
Sandika, manager, 777-88-909

Thank you for your prompt and expeditious handling of
this order.

Very truly yours,

Monday, 10 June 2013

Memorandum

OPPORTUNESIA
Ruko Antara, Blok B 212-214
Bekasi, 17115
Telp. (021) 777-88-909



MEMORANDUM

To : Mr. Ningrat
From : Sandika Aditya

Dear  Mr. Ningrat,
This memo is a reminder that we have a meeting set up with our clients for the Andrea account next Monday afternoon at 1:00 pm. I hope that you have finished your advertising proposal, which you are set to present at the said meeting. Please note my previous request that the AVP you give should not exceed 60 minutes. Drop by my office if you need any questions answered.

Sincerely,


Sandika Aditya

Invitation Letter

OPPORTUNESIA
Ruko Antara, Blok B 212-214
Bekasi, 17115
Telp. (021) 777-88-909


November 26, 2013

Mr. Margianto Ningrat
King Cobra Road, No. 23-24
Central Jakarta

Dear Mr. Margianto,

On behalf of Enterpreneurship, I am pleased to invite you to visit Gili Trawangan during December, 11 2013.
The purpose of your visit is to undertake company meetings during the period of December, 13 2013.
We understand that you will be responsible for all your own costs associated with this visit.
We look forward to seeing you in Bekasi shortly.

Yours sincerely,

Sandika Aditya

Complaining Letter

OPPORTUNESIA
Ruko Antara, Blok B 212-214
Bekasi, 17115
Telp. (021) 777-88-909


November 26, 2013

Mr. Margianto Ningrat, Sales Manager
LOLLIPUPS Enterprise

From: Sandika Aditya

Dear Mr. Ningrat,
I am writing to inform you that the goods we ordered from your company have not been supplied correctly. On 11 November 2013 we placed an order with your firm for 10 pairs of black shoes. The consignment arrived yesterday but contained only 7 pairs. This error put our firm in a difficult position, as we had to make some emergency purchases to fulfil our commitments to all our customers. This caused us considerable inconvenience.

I am writing to ask you to please make up the shortfall immediately and to ensure that such errors do not happen again. Otherwise, we may have to look elsewhere for our supplies.

I look forward to hearing from you by return.


Sincerely yours


Sandika Aditya